| sjr4x4 : Administrator 21st September 2015 11:14 AM |
Like it, too much text, so needs simplifying, but the concept is spot on 
Maybe 2 shops side by side, one with a queue of people, one without, the typo website name on the top of the shop, next to the right one.
Then you can add a smart call to action in the actual description. Remember you can have text in your advert, just minimal text in the actual image. Look at the fiverr one above, only has 1 word in it.
